1. your 'dump_.exe' is corrupt resulting from incorrect unpacking..
2. assuming that the 2nd picture shows all the instructions after replacements with the stolen bytes, it looks nothing likes
the ones you copied:
the guide is meant for AikaSEA anyway so a few things may appeared different with AikaIN.. or maybe I am wrong..PUSH EBP
MOV EBP,ESP
PUSH -1
PUSH 623730
PUSH 5EF620
MOV EAX,DWORD PTR FS:[0]
PUSH EAX
MOV DWORD PTR FS:[0], ESP
SUB ESP, 58
PUSH EBX
PUSH ESI
PUSH EDI
MOV DWORD PTR SS:[EBP-18], ESP
sorry I can't help you any further than this.. but I suggest you redo all the steps slowly, jot down all the important things
such as the EP, OEP, number of stolen bytes, the dumping OEP address etc..
again, sorry I can't be much of a help with your problem..